This ad is targeted at First Time Buyers, and the copy draws them in by painting a picture they can see themselves in. What does this mean? Well, it means this. When this ad was written, the question asked was “How does it feel to be a renter?”
It was easy enough to answer this question. MOST of us know how it feels. As a renter, you feel like you haven’t quite made it yet. You know that you don’t really have control over your living space because you have to ask permission to do this or that to make it feel like yours. You know that your landlord could ask you to leave and take your “home” away from you. You know that every dollar you spend on rent simply goes to your landlord’s pocket and does nothing to help you with your future. There is no equity in renting. Underneath it all, you feel a little inadequate . . . a little resentful.
Mostly, these feelings would sit below the surface for most people. These feelings would exist, but they wouldn’t preoccupy most prospects thoughts unless they were very close to trying to get out of renter status and into the class of home “owners”. This ad is very carefully worded to bring these emotions to the surface — to speak the thoughts that are in the back of their minds and, importantly, to make an offer promising to help them easily find their way out: “It doesn’t matter how long you’ve been renting, or how insurmountable your financial situation may seem. With the help of this report, it will become suddenly clear to you how you really can save for a down payment and stop wasting thousands of dollars on rent.” All they have to do to be rescued is visit your website to get a private, free report.
Why it works:
This ad works because it prods the SAFETY hot button and offers to help these buyers to get out of a situation they are unhappy in. It offers to help them achieve their need for security, stability and protection by helping them to easily own their own home.
If you are a subscriber to the Success Website, prospects are able to order this (and many other) reports online when they visit your website. All you need to do is run the ad. No further work is required from you.
To achieve proven results, you should run the ad exactly as shown below. Remember to replace “YOUR TOWN”, “YOURDOMAIN”, “PHONENUMBER”, “AGENT” and “COMPANY NAME” with your information.
Don’t Pay Another Cent in Rent
|YOUR TOWN – If you’re like most renters, you feel trapped within the walls of a house or apartment that doesn’t feel like yours. How could it when you’re not even permitted to bang in a nail or two without a hassle. You feel like you’re stuck in the renter’s rut with no way of rising up out of it and owning your own home. Well don’t feel trapped any more! A new FREE Special Report entitled “How To Stop Paying Rent and Own Your Own Home” has already helped dozens of local renters get out from under their landlord’s finger, and move into a wonderful home they can truly call their own.||You can make this move too by discovering the important steps detailed in this FREE Special Report. It doesn’t matter how long you’ve been renting, or how insurmountable your financial situation may seem. With the help of this report, it will become suddenly clear to you how you really can save for the down payment and stop wasting thousands of dollars on rent.
To order your FREE copy of this report, visit www.YOURDOMAIN.com, or call PHONENUMBER and stop wasting thousands of dollars on rent NOW.
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